Sounds good to me
Posted by Lotg (OZ) on September 06, 2004
In Reply to: Story of magic of creatures that fly posted by Smokey Stover on September 05, 2004
: : Can this sentence be shorter but without losing it's original meaning?
: : like "story of magical creatures that fly"? is it all right?
: The phrase (it is not a sentence, since it lacks a verb) could be a tiny bit shorter, but why? It has a nice rhythm and a clear meaning. SS
Got my interest. What is the story of magical creatures that fly?