Sounds good to me

Posted by Lotg (OZ) on September 06, 2004

In Reply to: Story of magic of creatures that fly posted by Smokey Stover on September 05, 2004

: : Can this sentence be shorter but without losing it's original meaning?

: : like "story of magical creatures that fly"? is it all right?

: The phrase (it is not a sentence, since it lacks a verb) could be a tiny bit shorter, but why? It has a nice rhythm and a clear meaning. SS

Got my interest. What is the story of magical creatures that fly?