Story of magic of creatures that fly
Posted by Smokey Stover on September 05, 2004
In Reply to: Story of magic of creatures that fly posted by Joey on September 05, 2004
: Can this sentence be shorter but without losing it's original meaning?
: like "story of magical creatures that fly"? is it all right?
I'm assuming that the version you refer to is the one with "magical." The version with "magic" is less clear and has a poorer rhythm. SS