Story of magic of creatures that fly

Posted by Smokey Stover on September 05, 2004

In Reply to: Story of magic of creatures that fly posted by Joey on September 05, 2004

: Can this sentence be shorter but without losing it's original meaning?

: like "story of magical creatures that fly"? is it all right?

The phrase (it is not a sentence, since it lacks a verb) could be a tiny bit shorter, but why? It has a nice rhythm and a clear meaning. SS